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# **Chapter V – Traces in the Valley**

The morning was cool, and the fog was slowly giving way to the first rays of sunlight as Gabrielle and Antoine set out towards the old mills and abandoned farms that, according to Éloi's notes, might be part of his mysterious project. The valley stretched before them like a painting, where every hill, every stream, and every path had a meaning, though no one had paid any attention to them for years.

"Look at this," Antoine said, pointing to the overgrown canal that once carried water to the mill. "This could be part of the system Éloi wrote about."

Gabrielle knelt by the moss-covered stones. Her hands ran over the sketches she kept in her bag, comparing them with reality. Each fragment fit almost perfectly—as if Éloi had left a map waiting to be deciphered.

Searching the grounds was a challenge. The bushes, the stagnant water in the former irrigation ditches, the cracked paths—everything seemed neglected and forgotten. Yet Gabrielle felt something she couldn't explain: a sense that the place itself was trying to show her something. As if nature and Éloi's design were intertwined in a mysterious dance, and she was the first in years to understand it.

After several hours, they reached the old mill at the end of the valley. The building, though partially ruined, still bore traces of its former days: a massive waterwheel overgrown with moss, fragments of pipes and steel cables that might have been part of the system. Gabrielle took the sketch and placed it against the wall. Everything fit.

"It's amazing," she whispered, awe and excitement tinged her voice. "He actually did it. The system would work if it were finished."

Antoine looked at her with growing admiration, but there was also a hint of worry in his eyes.
"That means someone must have wanted the project forgotten. And if they find out we're finding it… there might be resistance."

Gabrielle nodded. "We know it's for the good of the Valley. We can't go back."

Walking through the mill, they found an old journal recording Éloi's work, notes on water pressures, pipe construction, plans for redirecting streams. Everything pointed to the project being not only practical but also revolutionary. The Valley could finally get water where it had been lacking for years.

"We have to preserve it," Gabrielle said. "And we have to find a way to complete his work."

Antoine nodded, surveying the ruins of the mill. "It will be difficult, but if we manage to rebuild the system, we can not only restore Éloi's memory, but also transform the lives of the entire Valley."

As they continued to wander the countryside, Gabrielle and Antoine discovered more traces of the project: fragments of buried pipes, the outlines of old canals, the remains of pumping stations that once operated in perfect synchronization. Each piece made Éloi's project seem more and more real.

"It's like a puzzle," Gabrielle said. "Except this puzzle is entirely on the ground. We have to piece it together, step by step."

As the sun began to set, the siblings returned to the estate. Their steps were heavy but filled with determination. They knew one thing: discovering traces of Éloi's project was only the beginning. The real challenges lay ahead, and each step in the Valley brought them closer to answers to questions that could change not only their lives but the fate of their entire family and the surrounding area.

That evening, sitting by the fireplace, Gabrielle looked at her brother.

"Antoine... we're really close. He left us everything we need to complete his work."

Antoine nodded, staring into the fire. "Yes. And if we can do this, we can restore honor not only to him, but to our entire family."

The mist slowly settled over the hills, and the Valley seemed to wait, patiently and silently, as if it knew Éloi's story would soon come to an end.

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